Trophey - draft (critique please) by Toboe217, literature
Literature
Trophey - draft (critique please)
It started as it usually did, with Lis sitting in the front seat of the car, feeling weak.
Then again, it wasn't really starting. They were all fighting again, shouting and brandishing weapons. There was always some sort of dispute; over food ration, violence, who should drive, whether or not they could out-pace the Wolves, or if Lis should step up for another massacre.
This time it was about James, the nine-year old who had been driving earlier today and crashed, and whether or not he should be executed.
James, whose legs where shattered and broken beyond repair, was lying on the floor and trying not to cry out in agony. His eyes were
Trophey - draft (critique please) by Toboe217, literature
Literature
Trophey - draft (critique please)
It started as it usually did, with Lis sitting in the front seat of the car, feeling weak.
Then again, it wasn't really starting. They were all fighting again, shouting and brandishing weapons. There was always some sort of dispute; over food ration, violence, who should drive, whether or not they could out-pace the Wolves, or if Lis should step up for another massacre.
This time it was about James, the nine-year old who had been driving earlier today and crashed, and whether or not he should be executed.
James, whose legs where shattered and broken beyond repair, was lying on the floor and trying not to cry out in agony. His eyes were
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Also, I'm not dead. To anyone who, by this point, still cares...I still come on to answer comments and thing, I just don't think I'll be doing any more artwork. I lack the time, effort and motivation...I still wanna talk and stuff though :meow:
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Apologies
First off, I want to apologize :( I haven’t been on at all lately. But I do have a good reason.
I have exams coming up, and I’m at work a lot
I haven’t had any time to draw anything lately. I need As if I wanna get into a good Uni, so I’m doing lots of studying lately.
I feel like a such a geek :XD:
To anyone that didn’t forget about me, I’m not dead
:hug: I miss you guys
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I suddenly felt quite down, and felt like I needed to update.
First off, I'm sorry :( I haven't been on DA much and I probably won't be on for another few weeks. I have A level exams next week so studying is taking up most of my time :'( After that I go back to work (permanent, part-time :XD: ) so no time then either...don't expect a lot of updates for a while
Anyway, hope you all had a nice xmas :hug: and happy new year!
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Hi! I'm sorry for the late reply..i don't go on DA much anymore as for writing..nothing. I've got university applications coming up..so i'm 100% stressed 24/7 haha. if you wanna talk more often, do you have Fb?